Title: The Echizen Effect [Inui/Kaidoh]
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for Inui's obscene use of Chaos theory to get into Kaidoh's shorts.
Summary: Things are different without Echizen, only, you know, not really.
A/N: Spoilers for the end of the anime I suppose, but since that's not the good canon anyway, oh who cares. Thanks to marksykins for encouraging the emails and naming the fic.
OCHIBI!!!!!!--
You
have a match today, right?! Don't let those crazy foreigners eat you or
anything!!!! Momo-chan and me are going out for burgers to cheer you
on, but it's not the same without you. It's CHEAPER.
Oishi
says I can't type that because it's mean, but what's really mean is
READING OVER MY SHOULDER STUPID OISHI. YES THE CAPS ARE FOR YOU. THAT'S
RIGHT TURN AROUND THANK YOU.
Do your best, Ochibi!!!!!!
--Eiji
********
Echizen—
I'm
too tired to type because Tezuka-buchou made us run about a thousand
laps today, and it was all that viper's fault! But Fuji-sempai said you
had a match again today so I wanted to tell you that you have to
win!!!!! So that you don't make us look like a bunch of losers!
We're going to kick ass at Nationals without you!
--Momo-chan
********
Ryoma-kun—
Momoshiro
said you had a match today, so good luck. If you are having trouble
relaxing, I could always make you another cd…
What Momo is trying to say is that we miss you.
--Fujiko
********
Echizen—
Don't be careless.
--Tezuka
********
"Ochibi knows what I mean." Eiji sniffs as he taps his racket against
his shoulder and wipes sweat off his forehead with his wristband. "And
anyway, it's not the same!"
"Yes, but you'll make him feel
bad," Oishi replies patiently, reaching over to still Eiji's tapping
and examining his racket where the grip tape looks like it is peeling.
"Wouldn't you feel bad if you were in another country and all I said
was that it was cheaper to go for ice cream by myself?"
"You
say that now, Oishi!" Eiji protests, slapping away Oishi's fingers from
his racket. "Nya, it only peels because you pick at it! And I don't
think Ochibi has feelings about things that aren't tennis."
"Eiji!" Eiji silences Oishi by laying a finger against his lips and
makes a shrugging motion to the left. Oishi follows the line of Eiji's
vision and catches sight of Momoshiro.
He's been hitting a
ball against the wall beside the courts, but had paused just as he was
about to serve to himself again, and Oishi sees Momo's head tilt back
farther and farther as he tracks the motion of an airplane across the
sky, the roar of its engines a distant hum. Oishi looks back to Eiji,
who is shaking his head a little with a sad smile.
"Oishi, I
know we're supposed to go out after practice…" Eiji starts, and
Oishi interrupts him by biting the pad of the finger that is still
against his lips a little. Eiji yanks his hand away from Oishi with a
pout, but his eyes are dark, dark blue.
"Go on, take
Momo-chan out for burgers," Oishi says. Eiji asks if he's suuuuuure,
hoi? But he's already smiling sweetly and Oishi smiles back and gives
him a little push in Momoshiro's direction.
Things aren't so
different with Echizen gone, Inui thinks, tapping his pen against the
half-filled notebook page. And he should know, since he's spent the
last week compiling a list of the four major ways the atmosphere of
Seigaku is altered by the freshman's absence. This is a crucial
juncture for them to lose such a major player, and the tone of these
days might well determine the outcome of Nationals.
His data is always for the good of the team, after all.
Four
Major Ways The Absence of Echizen Ryoma, First Year, Is Affecting
Seigaku's National-level Regulars, Excluding Several Minor Factors
1.
Reduction in the practice time spent by Oishi Shuichirou, Third Year,
and Kikumaru Eiji, Third Year; i.e., Seigaku's Golden Pair.
Eiji shoots a bright smile at Oishi as he jogs through the wire door
off the court and over to Momoshiro, who is now leaning so far back to
track the plane that he looks like he might topple over.
It wouldn't be the first time. Eiji reaches down and snatches the tennis ball out of Momoshiro's slack grip.
Outcome:
Negative. While Oishi and Kikumaru work endlessly on their combination,
they have not taken a tournament yet this year. Their performance will
not improve at Nationals if they do not avoid distraction now.
Recommendations:
Pair practice time and endurance training outside of Regulars'
practice. Oishi and Kikumaru have reported success with private
training in other instances.
2. General depression and high distractibility of Momoshiro Takashi, Second Year.
Momoshiro gives Eiji a faint smile, then shakes himself and fakes it a
little better. When Eiji slings an arm over Momo's shoulder and murmurs
something in his ear, Momo even laughs a little. He lets himself be led
over to the clubhouse to change back into his street clothes.
When he and Eiji emerge, Momoshiro is wheeling his bike along with them
as he's been doing all week, even though it's only him and Kikumaru
now. He pauses uncertainly with the bike as they reach the corner of
the courts, then throws a leg over it and tilts his chin at Kikumaru.
Kikumaru's "YAHOI" makes Momoshiro laugh out loud as he pedals the
first few wobbly feet with Kikumaru's weight overbalancing the back of
the bike.
Outcome: Unknown. It seems likely Momoshiro
will regain his competitive edge, but the proximity of the National
matches may prove disastrous.
Recommendations: Time.
3. Complete preoccupation of Tezuka Kunimitsu, Third Year, and Fuji Syuusuke, Third Year.
Since their match last week, Tezuka and Fuji won't stop playing each
other. The first practice after Echizen's flight, the captain and Fuji
warmed up together without verbal confirmation, and then immediately
began a match. Inui nearly broke an ankle dashing for his notebook and
began scribbling feverishly, despite Coach Ryuzaki's snarling at him.
What was a few hundred laps in the face of improving his data for both
Seigaku's captain and tensai?
Today, the third day, Tezuka and
Fuji still show no signs of stopping, and Inui, head spinning with more
data than he can properly analyze in several weeks, tentatively reaches
the conclusion that there will be no shortage of data from now on.
Seigaku had been waiting breathlessly for those two to clash for more
than two years. However, now that there's no wonder-freshman to send in
as a distraction for either one of them, it turns out there's no way to
make them stop.
"I know you two can hear me!" Ryuzaki
is hollering at them, standing as close to the net poles as she dares,
and even then she nearly has her eyebrows stripped off by a Hakugei.
A vein in the old bat's forehead is pulsing dangerously, and the exertion of screaming has
her putting a steadying hand against the ref's chair, but it's Horio,
who has been charged on pain of death with keeping Ryuzaki from
over-exerting herself so Sakuno can return to girls' practice, who
actually passes out. Kachirou and Katsuo exchange long-suffering
glances until Taka-san comes over to help haul him off the court into
the shade.
"You're going to be running laps until you cry!"
Ryuzaki screams. Tezuka's eyebrow twitches; Fuji's smile broadens. Inui
makes a note to collect a sweat sample in order to further his work on
the Gamma Inui Stamina Longevi-Tea.
Outcome: Positive,
if Tezuka's shoulder holds under the strain. Their rivalry has improved
their play by 15% in three days. Fuji has already asked for a few
preliminary vector calculations for a fourth counter.
Recommendations: Get out of the way. Switch Ryuzaki's water bottle with a mild sedative.
4. Sustained absence of Kaidoh Kaoru, Second Year.
Inui had written 'disappearance' first, but then crossed it out; after
all, it isn't as though Inui doesn't know where Kaidoh is. Inui flips
his notebook closed and stands as the others finish their matches and
head into the clubhouse. Non-Regular practice ended long ago, and now
the cooling air is only interrupted by the steady thwock thwock of Fuji's counters and Tezuka's precise returns.
Inui tucks his notebook away into his tennis bag and then swings it up
onto his shoulder as he leaves the courts. He doesn't follow the others
into the clubhouse, although he does allow himself a small half-smile
as he hears one of the showers go on and Taka-san bellow "OH MY GOD
FREEZING!"
Picking up his pace into a jog, bag thumping
steadily against his back, Inui turns the familiar right out of the
school grounds, almost imagining that he can see the track Kaidoh has
worn in the sidewalk with from his perpetual route.
While
generally it annoys Kaidoh when Inui finds his routine predictable, and
he often goes to great lengths to thwart Inui's data about the locale
and duration of his runs, Inui learns after asking several key
streetfood vendors that Kaidoh is running an old route, the one he'd
used when they first began training together.
He wants Inui
to find him, then. Inui begins jogging again, letting the smile stay
since it's so determined. It fades on its own when Inui's thoughts turn
back to his list. Kaidoh was not particularly close to Echizen, or no
closer than he is to any other regular, and Inui has been puzzling over
Kaidoh's reaction to the first year's absence over the last few days.
At length, Inui realizes that if it isn't the loss of Echizen
specifically that is affecting Kaidoh, then there is really only one
other explanation.
It takes ten minutes to reach the stairs
that lead to the street courts, and Inui swings his bag to the ground
and sits down on the fourth step up, the optimum height to both see
down the sidewalk and stretch out his legs. If his breathing isn't back
to normal by the time Kaidoh arrives, the kouhai will certainly give
him a hard time about the brevity of his run versus his physical
condition.
The street lights are just coming on as Kaidoh
jogs up, sweat sliding down the corded muscles of his bare arms as the
flex and relax, the edges of the green bandana nearly black with damp.
Inui thought that he'd caught his breath, but he carelessly loses it
again at Kaidoh's approach.
Kaidoh sprawls out next to Inui
on the step in a controlled sprawl of limbs, droplets of sweat turning
the pavement dark when Kaidoh tugs off the bandana and shakes out his
hair. Inui holds out a water bottle, rolling his eyes and putting it to
his lips when Kaidoh stares at him stonily until he takes a few
swallows himself and raises an eyebrow. It isn't as if he's tried
slipping potentially dangerous drinks to Kaidoh just when his body is
desperate to absorb liquids quickly, Inui reflected wryly as Kaidoh's
throat works, streetlight glimmering off the outline of his skin.
Lately.
"I've been thinking," Inui says because there is a 27% higher chance
that Kaidoh will talk about his problems if Inui pretends that they are
his, "about Echizen leaving."
Kaidoh gives a noncommittal grunt
as he bends his head and pours water over the back of his neck. Inui
watches droplets slip through Kaidoh's hair and off his neck in a
cascade of chaos theory.
In North America a 12-year-old spreads his wings, and in Japan it rains on Inui's parade.
"I'm leaving too." Kaidoh's fingers still, and Inui hurries to finish
his thought, not because Kaidoh needs reassuring, but because he really
dislikes fostering misunderstandings. "When I graduate."
Tossing his head back in another scatter of localized rain, Kaidoh eyes
Inui neutrally, patiently. Inui opens his mouth, then closes it. He
looks away, flexing his fingers around the notebook that it would
really make him feel better to be holding right now.
He
thinks suddenly of a picture frame on his desk, and of the careful way
Tezuka mouths "Yanagi-san" around him, as if the syllables were sharp
and delicate. He thinks of Renji smiling wryly at him over the net,
opening his eyes just enough to enlighten Inui that things are
different now.
A coward at heart, Inui tells himself that he
is just worried that Kaidoh will look over a net at him someday the way
that he looked at Renji.
"You should return to singles,
Kaidoh," Inui says, watching the slide of a drop of water over his skin
as he turns his hand slightly to one side and then the other. "The
Boomerang Snake is perfected and your stamina is virtually unmatched on
the circuit. Even if Momoshiro weren't in his current state…"
"Not yet!" Kaidoh interrupts sharply, making Inui start, and the water
drop crashes to the pavement. Inui looks up to find Kaidoh's lips
pressed thin and his eyes narrowed, but his voice borrowing the lilt of
a teammate who is no doubt beating the pants off some hapless American
seed as they speak. "Not yet, sempai."
Inui stares a moment longer, then lets the chuckle work its way free.
"Mada mada," he repeats, shaking his head, "da, ne?"
Kaidoh rolls his eyes and hands Inui back the water bottle, but when
Inui reaches up to take it, Kaidoh runs fingers over the back of Inui's
hand and down to his wrist. He pushes himself off the step while Inui's
jaw is still dangling.
"You think too far ahead, sempai,"
Kaidoh says, tying his bandana back on and bouncing on the balls of his
feet just a little to warm his calves back up. "Come over."
"It's a school night," Inui replies, feeling frozen and brilliant.
Kaidoh shrugs and jogs off, but his sneaker has barely struck the
pavement a third time before Inui is snatching his bag off the ground
on the fly and dashing to catch up, pretending the bag is what's going thump thump thump against his chest as he settles into an easy rhythm beside Kaidoh.
Their elbows brush once in a while, and Inui feels dizzy with the amount of public affection Kaidoh is indulging in today.
Outcome: Positive. At least one of Seigaku's doubles pairs should be working on their combination.
Recommendations:
Inui taps his pen against the page thoughtfully, then casually moves up
a few lines to scratch out "Time" from Momoshiro's recommendations,
because rumor has it that he's turning into a ridiculous sap. He writes
"Judicious use of Gayi-Tea" instead.
"Sap," mutters Kaidoh in his sleep, rolling onto his other side. His spine brushes up against the side of Inui's hip.
After watching Kaidoh for a few seconds, Inui tosses the notebook to
the floor near his bag with the last line still blank and settles back
against the pillows. He's been told he thinks too far ahead.
*********
Echizen-kun—
Congratulations
on your match! Momoshiro stayed up to record it so we could watch it in
the clubhouse this morning. He wanted to say congratulations as well,
but he's out cold on one of Eiji's jerseys right now.
We are training hard here for Nationals, especially Fuji and Tezuka. You know how they are, no one can stop them…
Do your best.
--Oishi
*********
Yo, brat—
You
jerk! Dropping two games and making us worry like that! I had to stay
up all night just to make sure you didn't humiliate Seigaku, and now I
can barely even keep my eyes open! My nose is practically buried in the
keyboard right now! Some of us still have school, you know!!!!
You better keep winning, or I'm coming over there!
--Momo-chan-sempaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
*********
Echizen—
I
don't know what that idiot just emailed you, but he's got an 'I' key
stuck in his nostril and I'm taking him to the infirmary.
Don't forget about our game.
--Kaidoh-sempai
*********
Echizen—
To
set your mind at ease about our training regimen and spirit going into
Nationals, I have written a list of the key changes that have occurred
here since your absence, and my own recommendations for making the best
of the situation and maximizing our potential for victory at Nationals.
Firstly, the Golden Pair has been working on their combination
as usual, but as you know they have not managed to procure even a
single…
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